The table below gives information about favorite pastime in different countries in percentage?
The tabular chart reveals the information about the seven pastimes activities which are performed by 30-50 years old in eight different nations. The data is calibrated in percentum which is clearly and coherently represented.
It is crystal clear from the table, Canada is participating in seven activities but it highest percentage in telivision. In addition to this, England has been attended in four activities but it is lowest percentage in music. However, in France reading, hobbies and music has 30,20 and 4 percentage respectively.
As far as, trend is concerned that Australia, Korea, China and U.S.A are participated in all activities. Moreover, Australia has been highest percentage in telivision as compare to other activities, Australia either or Korea has same percentage in hobbies that is 45. Furthermore, in Korea nation music, beach and sleep activities has 2,2 and 4 percentage respectively.
Overall, it is evident that Japan is only one nation who has liked an activity that is reading, and as well as Japan has intrested in reading. That is 62%.has
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2865497076 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05999425777 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584795321637 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3644509678 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135901339235 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478264866526 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537194490977 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744302649267 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517980430693 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.