It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages.
In the words of one of the prominent psychologists of our history James Bandura, it is frequently argued that change is more advantageous to people than trying to have everything remain unchanged. Clearly, it seems to me that the merits of variation in our life outweigh its drawbacks.
In the first place, it is obvious that making changes to daily routine has a lot more advantages in comparison with its downsides because success can be reached only after life changes. In other words, to achieve important milestones people should change their usual lifestyle first. For instance, everyone in the list of most successful people, assembled by American news magazine, had made a decision that completely changed and improved their life. Therefore, I am convinced that ambitions cannot be realized without life modifications.
In the second place, I also understand that alterations can bring diversity and interest to our monotonous life. To explain, changes may bring choices for happiness and fulfillment. For example, according to a recent survey by Time magazine, 60 percent of Americans reported they are unsatisfied with their ordinary life, in which nothing unusual and fascinating happens and they want to alter their life. Therefore, it is clear that nowadays transitions are quite important to our society since virtually all might want to have exciting adventures and experience impressive events.
Whereas some people believe that changes entail a risk of life impairment. However, I suppose that there is no element of risk and only people can determine their own destiny. To put it another way, if all required arrangements are made, then undoubtedly change will be made for the better. For instance, the co-founder of Facebook Mark Zuckerberg started his project when he was attending at Harvard but then dropped out in 2003 in order to complete his project. Eventually, he became one of the richest people as he was not afraid of changes. All things considered, I guess people should use all their opportunities to make change for the better.
All in all, nowadays it is often argued that people should change their life instead of trying to have everything endure stable. In my opinion, benefits of changes in life outweigh its disadvantages for several reasons.
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Suggestion:
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...s and experience impressive events. Whereas some people believe that changes entail...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, i guess, i suppose, in my opinion, in other words, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23306233062 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82885812475 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577235772358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4987720533 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.277777778 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6111111111 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222639886726 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764751835246 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804749885437 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152513321536 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861444278729 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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