You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been doing
Explain why you can no longer do this work
Recomment another person who is interested in the work.
Dear Mr John Edward,
I am working at plastic factory and testing new product is my daily job. I have been there for 2 years. Although I extremely love my current job with really nice coworker and good salary, i regret that i can not continue to work at your company. Because my husband decided to move to Canada on september and i have to come with him.
i wonder if you need another one who can change my current position. I would like to introduce my friend. Her name is Helen. She was a staff of plastic company too and she had to stop that job because her family move to this city. So it take a long time for her to go to work. That is the reason why she need a new job. I believe that she has enough qualify for this job.
I looking forward hearing from you.
yours sincerely,
Mary yang.
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| 2018-07-03 | Faithodunowo | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h really nice coworker and good salary, i regret that i can not continue to work ...
^
Line 2, column 203, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...coworker and good salary, i regret that i can not continue to work at your compan...
^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...september and i have to come with him. i wonder if you need another one who can ...
^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...september and i have to come with him. i wonder if you need another one who can ...
^
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...use her family move to this city. So it take a long time for her to go to work. That...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...t she has enough qualify for this job. I looking forward hearing from you. your...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
.... I looking forward hearing from you. yours sincerely, Mary yang.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 646.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14102564103 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13241011828 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0833327477 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.6923076923 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162057253951 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563604606266 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453710052912 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852511683525 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508497248908 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.1 8.37731958763 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.84 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.