Some people are reducing their walks, however many health experts says that walking is the best exercise to maintain health. Why do people walk less? What might encourage people to walk longer distance.
Walking is simplest form of exercise yet very effective in improving physical and mental health. However these days people are not interested in walking regardless of immense benefits of this activity. This essay will discuss the reasons why most people do not give preference to walk and what could be done to inspirate people to adopt activity in daily life.
There are numerous reasons behind this trend. Firstly, people choose public or private transport vehicles instead of walking because it is time and energy saving which is much needed in today's fast paced world. Walking to work place and other near place take a lot of time from their hectic life so it become more difficult manage office work and household chores. Hence, they do not consider it feasible way of traveling. Secondly, Travelling by vehicles make people's life comfortable which is important of people these days. They don't have to face harsh weather condition and waste their energy in walking. Finally, Some people don feel safe while walking on road due to road infrastructure and poor following of laws in their country which makes them think they might get injured or met with an accident while walking. Therefore most people do not consider walking a feasible option to travel.
However there are some steps that could encourage people to walk more. Government ought to invest in building safe road infrastructure, footpath and park where people can enjoy walk without having fear about anything. In addition some awareness campaign could be organised which make people aware about advantages of walking. Besides this every individual should squeeze in time for daily walk by making schedule as it is for his own benefit. This all can be done to make walking preferred choice among people.
It is admitted that walking is best form of exercise to keep good health. This essay discussed people do not walk much these day due to shortage of time, discomfort and fear of injury. However, effective methods for this issue are some health policies and develop pathways. By doing this, hopefully, the number of people goes for a walk or even walks for committing will increase, eventually.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04444444444 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43811681021 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580555555556 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.904645213 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428667742168 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140332988754 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882782174638 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289198201478 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050524696048 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.