Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
As a rule, the majority of the public argue that graduating from university is the only means to ensure a worthwhile job, while others believe that people can go straight into work to guarantee a good job. Generally, it seems to me that to assure a top career in major companies students should receive higher education.
On the one hand, virtually all are convinced that finishing university is the most effective way to get a job. In other words, they understand that in university they can improve the skills in their field of interest and obtain graduation certificates, thereby have the upper hand in work admissions. For example, in recent years, almost all large companies like Apple have begun to require certificates of achievement from the university to ascertain the candidate's competence. As a consequence, people without a college degree are disadvantaged in finding a well-paid job. Therefore, society supposes that the only way to get a permanent job is to receive at least a bachelor's degree.
On the other hand, others think that graduating from university is not required to take up a post in commercial enterprises. To put it another way, they believe that students should find a temporary job after finishing school to broaden their work experience instead of wasting time in the academic institutes. For instance, the co-founder of Facebook Mark Zuckerberg started his project when he was attending at Harvard but then dropped out in 2003 in order to complete his project. Eventually, he became one of the richest people, since he was determined not to waste time on demagogy but to invest all his time and energy in his project. Therefore, some people are certain that to achieve success students should channel their energy into work rather than tertiary education.
Obviously, I understand that university education is a better way to ensure a decent job. To explain, not all non-graduates can find the desired job. For example, according to a recent survey by Kazakhstani ministry of labor, 80 percent of the unemployed are people without further education. Therefore, it is obvious that to start working without higher education a perilous decision, and it is safer to enter the university to a get a worthwhile job.
On the whole, some people report that getting a degree from the university is the most efficient way to guarantee a well-paid job, while others argue that tertiary education is not required to get a job. Obviously, in my opinion, if students truly want to ensure a successful career in the future, they should probably finish the university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88143758468 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482517482517 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5657521428 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321264619274 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099250562008 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902917953599 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189722548375 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474754071337 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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