Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
write a letter to the local council. In your letter
give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is in regards to the recent news in our community that our local council decided to shut down the services of our sports and leisure centre.
I and my family are regular visitors to this sports centre. I spend my evenings swimming in the pool along with my friends, which make me to relax after a hectic day at work. It also keep myself healthy and fit. Also, I visit every weekend with my family to play badminton.
During my visits to the centre, I observed that most of the children and adults in our community find this sport centre very near and feasible to spend their time. I strongly believe this sports and leisure centre plays a vital role in our community which encourages local people to stay healthy despite of their busy and mechanical schedule.
Decommissioning of this sports centre can leave a negative impact on our community people’s physical and mental health, because people may feel lazy and difficult to find other sports centre which might be far from our community.
As one of the residents of our community, I strongly recommend you to reconsider the idea of shutting down the sports and leisure centre. Hope you will consider my suggestion.
Yours faithfully
Gowthami.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ices of our sports and leisure centre. I and my family are regular visitors to ...
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...ax after a hectic day at work. It also keep myself healthy and fit. Also, I visit e...
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...end with my family to play badminton. During my visits to the centre, I observ...
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... local people to stay healthy despite of their busy and mechanical schedule. ...
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... which might be far from our community. As one of the residents of our community...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83962264151 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54139807295 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589622641509 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6456200826 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2727272727 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180002744615 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748725146575 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482560404679 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961068645193 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305545603785 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.