The diagram illustrates how many billions KWH of electricity were produced and were consumed by the top ten countries during the year of 2014. Overall, the most obvious pieces of information are that China showed its superiority over other countries which produced and used electricity at that year. In addition, the ten countries had a larger number in the production of electricity than the consumption of that, except Germany.
Moving to more detailed analysis, China had a higher figure for electricity production and usage that was accounted for 5,398 and 5,322 each –the largest number of this sector. The second top rank was United States, which was listed at 4,099 (production) and 3,866 (consumption). These were followed by Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea Rep, which were ranged from 1,057 to 485,1 respectively for electricity production and from 1,038 to 449,5 successively in the usage of electricity.
Subsequently, it is clearly seen that the electricity produced had a higher level than electricity used in almost ten countries. The exception was Germany whose the number of consumption electricity (582.5) dominated that of electricity generated (526.6).
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- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'who's'?
Suggestion: who's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90759634461 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8087223482 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328884149642 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141042283185 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549824983551 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215844932025 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694195757473 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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