The line graph shows the books had been bought in four countries (Germany, France, Italy and Austria) during the period between 1995 to 2005. Units are measured in US millions dollars.
It can be clearly that people who live in Germany spend a highly amount of million dollars about 95 that was the first country of all, while France was the second country spend amount 65 million dollars.
In terms of the Austrian had been dramatically increasing of the amount of money which spend on book, however the Italian had been a slight increasing from 1995 and until 2005 the amount risen about 11 million dollars only, in addition to Italy is the lowest country spent money in booking.
Over all, the amount of money bought books increased in all countries are Germany, France, Italy and Austria over the 10 year- period Germany had been the first place in this comparison, whereas the France is the second, Austria is third and Italy of the end.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('highly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('amount') instead of another adjective.
...y that people who live in Germany spend a highly amount of million dollars about 95 that was th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, third, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16810505338 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.743675831 43.030603864 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.2 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 5.23603664747 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392456563498 0.215688989381 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207365327202 0.103423049105 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175363136515 0.0843802449381 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240757263591 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131855630232 0.0819641961636 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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