You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you offer the ticket to your friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• Explain detailed the concert.
• Why you are unable to go
• How can your friend receive the ticket.
Dear Hung,
It’s your pal, Truong. I believe you still remember the classical music concert I told you last week. I had planned to participate in this event and bought a ticket 3 weeks ago. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to go to the concert because of an unexpected test the same day, which my tutor has just announced me. Therefore, I’m writing this letter to let you know that I wish to give you my ticket since I know you’re also excited about this event.
The show will be organized in the Central City Hall on July 1st. Although it will mostly play classical music, the ticket seller told me that there would be some modern songs performed by a band called ‘Zero 9’ due to a commercial contract between the producers and the band. However, I’m sure you will have a fantastic time.
Do give me a call if you decide to go. I’ll stop by you house and give you the ticker on this Friday after I finish my study. And don’t worry about paying me, it’s my gift to you since I missed your last birthday.
Hope to see you soon.
Your best friend,
Truong Nguyen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.635 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46774694813 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6410378977 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3076923077 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317464585622 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121189264038 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063531093222 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173940605023 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807739987638 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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