Dear Neha,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. It's been so long since we last met. There is a music concert next Saturday, Unfortunately, I will not be attending it, Thus I want to offer the ticket to you.
The music concert "Musical Dream" is a band performance by the Beetles. As you know, it is one of the famous bands all over the world and would be displaying a great show by presenting their new album. Moreover, the venue is the Hard rock cafe which adds more fun to it due to its great ambience. In addition, one beer will be free from their side to everyone.
Though I was dying to attend it for so long, I won't be able to go there due to an interview on the same day. As you know I want to switch my job so the interview is very important to me. Never mind, I will make it to the concert some other time.
Let me know if you are interested in going to the concert so that I can courier you the tickets on time. I don't want you to miss it due to delay in receiving the tickets.
Write me back soon!
Take care,
Nikka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.11538461538 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33904977419 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620192307692 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9894900359 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8461538462 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249760705746 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854412347522 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934937948696 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1766312145 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104351170599 0.0580467560999 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.32 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.33 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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