Many students decide to further their study abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?
What is your view on this? What do you prefer?
Give reasons for your answer.
Definitely, many students prefer their study abroad. Surely, studying overseas has its advantage and disadvantage, but I strongly believe that it has more benefits instead of drawbacks.
On the one hand, some think that study overseas has a lot of advantage for students. For example, they believe students that study abroad are responsible for daily work and paying bills and they can expand knowledge about another culture. In addition, they learn a foreign language and best advantage of studying overseas is more chance to find an appropriate job with high salaries.
On the other hands, some people believe that study abroad has more negative impacts than the positive one.
One negative aspect is an unfamiliar culture can lead to homesickness. Another drawback of the study overseas is that student getting into many different problems until they learn a new language and culture so this may add more pressure on the student and interrupt their study.
n according to this discussion I prefer to study abroad because in my country there are political rules about used internet and computer, on the other hand, I am a computer engineer and I need more knowledge for my skill so definitely I chose to study abroad.
In conclusion, studying abroad has pros and cons. However, as I stated above, advantages study of abroad more than disadvantages, therefore, young people could be improved their skills by study in a new country. In the end, it is a personal decision that each person chooses based on his goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04365079365 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67038136488 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3670084184 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.916666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273135907256 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120580419246 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933119195281 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158108643124 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482905345997 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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