The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The pie charts provide the information about how dangerous waste products are dealt with in republic of Korea, Sweden ad United Kingdom. The charts classify the country based on the way of the country in destroying waste products.
In Republic of Korea, there are three ways only in destroying waste products. It uses recycling, underground and incineration way. Recycling becomes the biggest way to dealt with waste in the country, it shown by chart that 69 % of waste is handling by recycling. The second option in the country is underground way by 22%. On the other hand, the country is also in...
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Sentence: Recycling becomes the biggest way to dealt with waste in the country, it shown by chart that 69 of waste is handling by recycling.
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Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to it and shown
Sentence: The biggest way to dealt with waste in UK is destroying the waste in underground, it is 82.
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Sentence: In conclusion, majority of the countries use underground and incineration way to dealt with waste products.
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Suggestion: Refer to to and dealt
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Words: 273 200 (write the essay in 20 minutes)
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 10
No. of Words: 273 200
No. of Characters: 1309 1000
No. of Different Words: 102 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.065 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.795 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.792 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 88 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.059 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.546 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.353 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.396 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.58 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4