What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
Some people reside in metro cities instead to backward areas. They prefer to live in these cities because in various benefits are given to those who live in cities than to stay in the rural areas. Facilities such as adequate supply of water, nutrient food and job opportunities are easily available in cities than rural areas. In this easy the problems of living in the rural areas will be discussed. I will also discuss how these problems can be minimized.
To begin with, some people do not get fresh water to drink because water purification systems have not been installed by the government at these locations. This has caused problems like skin cancer in rural areas. Moreover, in these areas the water sanitation systems also have not been arranged properly. Excessive rain cause floods in these areas. Thus, problem of water is a major concern for the rural people. In addition to this, people also confront problems of hygienic food. As the transportation system at these locations is not adequate which cause shortage of food. Moreover, owing to less industrialization in the rural areas, there are less jobs are available for the denizens. Due to the fact, they shift in cities.
The problem of water, food and job can easily be solved if the concerned state government take prudent actions. Firstly, water sanitation and purification system must be installed by them in these areas. Moreover, Industrialists must be encouraged to shift their plants in rural areas so that the local denizens could get jobs.
In the end, in the rural areas shortage of food, employment and inadequate supply of water cause various problems for the denizens, therefore, government and industrialists must think to solve these issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lso confront problems of hygienic food. As the transportation system at these loca...
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Line 3, column 650, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun jobs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...alization in the rural areas, there are less jobs are available for the denizens. Du...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
... get jobs. In the end, in the rural areas shortage of food, employment and inadeq...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08041958042 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68173612442 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493006993007 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3658740492 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7222222222 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267701504127 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09578022106 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082543190985 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185002904598 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05186986511 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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