The two diagrams indicate the steps in the growth of the silkworm and the procedures of silk cloth production. Overall, the life cycle of the silkworm consists of 4 stages and the production of silk cloth is not too complicated.
The first diagram is about the life cycle of the silkworm. First, moths lay eggs on mulberry leaves, and after 10 days, silkworm larvae are born. They consume mulberry leaves for nutrition, and 4 to 6 weeks later, they begin to emit silk threads. Then, these threads altogether form cocoons for the moth grubs in about 3 to 8 days, and after 16 days in the cocoons, like other caterpillars, silkworm larvae become moths.
The second diagram shows the technique of producing silk cloth. First, the cocoons are selected to ensure the best silk quality. After that, all the chosen cocoons are boiled in water. Then, the cocoons are unwound to 300-900 meters threads, and they are twisted together to increase endurance, stability and quality. The twisted threads are weaved together to make cloth, and either the piece of cloth or the threads itself can be died in order to produce clothing with different colors.
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- The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 84
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
...ty and quality. The twisted threads are weaved together to make cloth, and either the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90256410256 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42431253261 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6992598467 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9090909091 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252876510645 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110554385665 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103263264925 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188795900418 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959570636606 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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