Join in sport
In today’s society, human are more take care of their healthy and one of the best measures is join in sport or play in particular bodybuilding. Although this sector has been many big benefits for people, it also has some drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are several of profits of sport. Concerning the first, by far greatest merit adults and children can get from sport is healthy when they play in certain sport. Indeed, people who do physical exercise or play sport daily can growth their power day by day. Experts suggested that, we all should play or do exercise daily at least for thirty minutes so they keep us active, fit and healthy. Another important advantage that needs to be taken into account is that it helps human-being to control a balance in their life. Playing sports is also fun and a part of entertainment, increasing our stamina and help us in combat against all stress in life. Therefore, human should also maintain their routine and help them to be disciplined in their life.
On the other hand, there are also concerns about the influence of sports. The main drawback can be count is that some activities in sport maybe harm to human body. As evidence of this, number of injured is rising in the sport such as football, tennis or other particular sport. Aside that, if human spend a lot of time for playing sports, it keeps people away all activities like social communities, gathering, picnics and many other and can be also have a bad effect with their studies, especially with children.
In conclusion, although sports play a tremendous role in people’s life, its disadvantage could not be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 669, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...s in combat against all stress in life. Therefore human should also maintain their routin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, therefore, at least, in conclusion, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80212014134 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5853122111 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593639575972 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2508503314 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185846439223 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838434227508 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823275919609 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119835425169 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290574317328 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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