Traditional classrooms held lecturers with multiple participants. now Technology make it easier and faster to information.
In this modern era, Technology has changed human life. the ways of education has also changed. now they can learn and subject from technological gadgets. there are many technological gadgets to teach a student like smart smart classes, computers, projectors, DVDs and other equipments. students show their fascination in these classes. in future students can get knowledge while sitting at their home. nowadays, parents recruit their children in these schools. children can learn their work from internet on their smartphones and laptops. sometime, parents cannot afford these gadgets for their children as it is very expensive to buy.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-07-11 | Inderjit singh sandhu | 11 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...era, Technology has changed human life. the ways of education has also changed. now...
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Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[3]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...anged human life. the ways of education has also changed. now they can learn and su...
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Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now
...the ways of education has also changed. now they can learn and subject from technol...
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Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...and subject from technological gadgets. there are many technological gadgets to teach...
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Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: smart
...logical gadgets to teach a student like smart smart classes, computers, projectors, DVDs an...
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Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Students
... projectors, DVDs and other equipments. students show their fascination in these classes...
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Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...how their fascination in these classes. in future students can get knowledge while...
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Line 1, column 403, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
... knowledge while sitting at their home. nowadays, parents recruit their children in thes...
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Line 1, column 462, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...ecruit their children in these schools. children can learn their work from internet on t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sometime
...ernet on their smartphones and laptops. sometime, parents cannot afford these gadgets fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 538.0 1615.20841683 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 98.0 315.596192385 31% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48979591837 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.14634628365 4.20363070211 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70390835024 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 176.041082164 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.744897959184 0.561755894193 133% => OK
syllable_count: 155.7 506.74238477 31% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6999791927 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.7777777778 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.8888888889 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0485093978434 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225322989526 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366233408611 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0485093978434 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 50.2224549098 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.38 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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