Nuclear families dominating the traditional joint families is quite visible these days. There has to be various reasons behind it. This essay will discuss autonomy and ambition as two major aspects for this happening, as well as, how this trend has detrimental effect in the form of loneliness and rise in emotional imbalance over the society.
To embark, autonomy is what every individual ask for these days, may it be a kid or a parent. To strengthen, evidently, many parents give a separate flat to their kids as a wedding gift so that both, parents and children can enjoy their part of freedom. Thus, priority these days is no interference. Nevertheless, ambition also plays a pivotal role in it. As, everyone seems to be career oriented and for the sake of their luxurious life, they are ready to sacrifice their own self, let alone, families. Hence, no question of joint families where small ones are also at stake.
On the other hand, this division of families are exacerbating the situation in the form of giving birth to the feeling of loneliness. For example, as per the US research 2014, surpisingly, more than 88% people living at urban places are suffering from loneliness. Apart from this, emotional imbalance is also one of the outcome of the aforementioned event. To highlight, increasing in suicide rates especially at juvenile ages can be put as a proof. Ironically, society is still following the culture of tiny families, blindly.
To encapsulate, tedious families are being overtaken by smaller ones and are doing no good to the society, in my views.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, thus, well, apart from, as to, for example, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97358490566 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78360147404 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0211802007 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129069355582 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375482457478 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509423525804 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857281832615 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621588988573 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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