Road safety is becoming increasingly concerning these days. Some people trust decreasing the uppermost limit of speed will result in supreme road safety while others say there are several other measures to enhance it. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and support the view that there are many other steps to enhance road safety.
First and foremost reason why people believe reducing speed will ensure their safety on roads is better control on driving. It is a known fact that if people will drive slowly, they would have better control over their driving, Consequently, it will reduce the chance of an accident. For instance, In most of the cases, vehicles collide due to high speed. Secondly, the damage will be less in case of accidents involving lower speed. When vehicles collide at a high speed, it leads to massive destruction. As a result, 90% of cases had shown people dying on spot due to the high-speed collision. Thus, people consider decreasing upper limit of speed as the main solution for their road safety.
On the other hand, there are many other steps for maximizing road safety and I do believe the same. Firstly, strict punishments should be given for breaking road rules and signals. Secondly, Government should improve road infrastructure and maintain them regularly. If the roads will be in good condition, it would be less likely to cause an accident. For example, there were more than 2000 road accidents reported in 2017 due to potholes on roads. Thirdly, wearing a helmet on bikes and seat belts in four-wheelers should be mandatory in all countries. Thus, there are several other measures to better road safety.
To sum up, This essay discussed why people want the upper limit of speed to be minimized to ensure best road safety, However, In my views, there are hundreds of other solutions to provide greater road safety.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'ensure the best'.
Suggestion: ensure the best
...upper limit of speed to be minimized to ensure best road safety, However, In my views, ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95873015873 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47720776824 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536507936508 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9958168588 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7777777778 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342558153513 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109359760425 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956630325427 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230992822465 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684284833442 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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