There is an ongoing debate about what people wear reveals a lot about their persona and culture. Though, some people believe in this notion while others disagree. I agree with the former view. This essay is going to elaborate the supporting points for the same.
Firstly, A nation's culture can be very well depicted in its citizen's clothing. In other words, what you wear comes from the place you belong, As a result, people dress-up as per their traditions, For example, Indian people(Punjabis) wear turbans due to their religion. Similarly, a bride in the USA follows a white gown while an Indian bride attire in the red one. The reason for this is the difference in their marriage celebrations. Hence, we can say, a lot can be observed about various traditions and practices from the clothes of its citizen.
Secondly, it is a known fact that the first impression is the last impression and that comes mainly from what you clothes you opted and the way you dressed up., For instance, A man in pressed shirt pant shows his tidiness and well-organizing behavior while oppositely, a man wearing crushed and untidy shirt gives a bad impression of himself. Consequently, the choice of clothes and dressing style says a lot about one's habits.
Finally, Few more things can be reflected in it, such as a lively nature can be seen in a person wearing bright colors, however, those carrying plain and light colored dress are more simple and relaxed. Let's take an example, we all know how cheerful and fun loving Priyanka Chopra(an Indian actress) is and it is always seen in her dresses while Susan khanna(another Indian actress) told us in her interview that light color dresses help in keeping her calm and cool.
To Conclude, Admittedly, clothes reveals a lot about one's culture and character, However, we should also keep in mind about one's deeds before giving any judgements about their characters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5909225092 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582043343653 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.7045232536 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.928571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4285714286 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217750472983 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767698512374 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623219042389 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123103164313 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578561997106 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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