Nowadays a considerable amount of people included dangerous activities in their lifestyles. I believe that people who enjoy risky activities should not be interrogated from it because it is totally their choice. There are several reasons why people enjoy such activities.
First of all some people include themselves in dangerous activities because they want to train body muscles and stay fit and healthy. They enjoy overcoming difficult challenges while being under pressure. Some people do this activities to Take their attention away from daily stressful life and/or to try to forget their failiures. Most common and popular dangerous activities are parajumping, paragliding, surfing, skiing from high mountains etc. Although this activities are widely popular people also can feel the burst of adrenalin while simply skating in a path that is rough ur by parkouring in an are which is full of different obstacles.
Additionally, some people use dangerous activities as a source of becoming famous. For example there are lots of videos of people jumping of cliff with a parachute or walking on a bridge which can get destroyed any time. Unsurprisingly this type of videos gain high relevancy and everyone is amazed by how brave the participants of dangerous activities are.
Another use of risky activities is helping people. For example firemans risk their lives daily to save innocent people from dying. Rescuers who control sea near the beach save immensely large amount of people from drowning. Dangerous activities are important part of lives of people who save us from danger anytime. These people should feel proud because society respects them for their heroics.
As a conclusion, I strongly believe that dangerous sports and activities are useful as they can help us stay fit, take our concentration away from daily life,become famous or choose profession which helps out people who are in need of saviour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32679738562 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7789386271 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571895424837 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8882060305 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8823529412 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279734829506 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104394361002 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690719746254 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170184165398 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253177730826 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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