Nowadays, technology became more and more important for society. Some people argue that wide use of technologies has negatively affected on people, but I don't agree with this idea. In my opinion technology has a positive effect on people and how they live, and it has a lot of benefits for us.
Firstly, technologies made communication with other people easier by having a message or call options on every modern phone and by inventing social networks like Facebook, Viber, Twitter, etc. For centuries, communicating with people from different area or country was complicated and the only way to send a message was to write a letter. It took a long time to deliever the message. By modern marks that way of delivering messages is not eficient and comfortable. I have few friends who live in different countries and messaging feature with instant delivery massively helps to stay in touch with them.
Secondly, technological progress increased variety of transports and made transportation simple.
At the past people had to use bicycles to cover considerable distances or they had to walk by foot.Further into the past people used to ride horses, which is still a common way of transportation in some countries but certainly not the easiest one.As of today we can travel on the land, on the water and in the air as well.
Most popular transports used on land are cars, buses, metros etc. We can travel on water by boats or ships.In air we can transport by enormous planes or even by a helicopter. These inventions made transportation way less complicated than it was centuries ago.
In a conclusion, I strongly believe that technology has made earth a better place to live as it clearly has a lot of benefits for people. Technologies made our lives easier by improving ways of commuication and making transportation more and more simple.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97096774194 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98633899675 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8099443673 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.733333333 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176186175707 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613690833223 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505196639258 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938691522683 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056445749595 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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