Some people think that several short holidays from school are better, while others think that one long summer holiday is better for children. Discuss and include your own opinion.
It is true said that" The holidays reason is perfect time to reflect on our blessings and seek out ways to make life better for those around us". This particular topic asserts that which one is better holiday for children; a short or long holiday. Short holidays are best and I shall explore the same in following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are some antagonists who believe that short holidays. They raise their view point by claiming that short holidays boost up energy of children. Moreover, they feel fresh as well as more energetic after some break from school. They concentrate more on their work as well. For instance, education minister of india has claimed that in last 3 years students concentration on studies increases due to short holidays.
Probing ahead, many people believing on this assertion because students do not wander from right path when there is one holiday: short holidays. They worked hard to achieve their goal in short vocation. Further more, in return it increase their marks in theoratical as well as practical portion. A good epitome of this could be a survey conducted by delhi government and they also astonished to saw result as 93% of schools in delhi gave long summer holidays to students and in return students seem very happy and satisfied.
To conclude, I believe that both type of holidays are good for children in order to concentrate on their studies. Students should take benefits from holidays instead of wasting them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in short, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99596774194 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5372325036 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7832605682 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288917686589 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100006556672 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842743124486 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179248886371 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644103633268 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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