Gun Trafficking
In El Salvador, where a person is murdered every hour, it is hard to imagine families situations having to cope with insecurity and poverty at the same time.50% of the guns used for homicides in this country come from the United States. In Guatemala the number of illegal firearms goes up to 1,000,000.
Gangs are the principal buyer of these weapons. Gangs are formed as a way of survival in the neighborhoods and to protect themselves from other gangs, since the police force is not effective in the region. Gangs get together to fight against each other, protect their territories and defend their families. Active members of these groups are also, usually related not only to guns, but to drugs and narc trafficking.
At the same time, US firearms trafficking to Mexico, Guatemala, El Salvador and Honduras has increased rapidly and at significant levels. Around half million guns were purchased annually to be trafficked to Mexico from 2010 to 2012. The use of straw purchasers is used as a mayor tactic in illegal firearms purchasing in the US. The United States does not have any federal law to regulate the purchases.
The black market of guns in the US is worth around 250 million dollars per year and thousands of human lives in Central America.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88372093023 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60110223339 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637209302326 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4670772892 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4545454545 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168612872109 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517814174705 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859441250141 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899348954872 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685281570213 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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