The table below shows the sales at small restaurant in Downtown business district. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the sales at small restaurant in Downtown business district in month of October during 7 to 13 October. The data is clearly and coherently represented.
To start with, the sale was $2400 for lunch and $3623 for dinner on Monday. The earnings showed slight variation on Tuesday and Wednesday , that is, only $2595 and $3445 for Lunch nd dinner respectively. Further, the earnings reduced on Thursday for lunch to $2375, but the dinner sale continued to rose and had $3800 earnings.
Nevertheless, the sale continued to boom by the end of Friday, which was $2500 for lunch and $4350 for dinner. During two consecutive days of weekend; Saturday and Sunday, the deals dropped down upto $1550 and $2450 for lunch and dinner respectively.
Overall, the earnings on dinner continued to rose but the lunch deals showed small fluctuations; the sale was more on working days, which diminished to noticable extent in weekend days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...light variation on Tuesday and Wednesday , that is, only 595 and 445 for Lunch nd ...
^^
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve days of weekend; Saturday and Sunday, the deals dropped down upto 550 and 450 ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68000773849 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8160727019 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129813434927 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715714652349 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11631138584 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112716141322 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117879366004 0.0819641961636 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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