Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Television is one of the great inventions of modern world. People have varied opinion if television actually benefits humans or has more disadvantages exceeding the advantages. Out of many conflicts regarding television one important concern regarding which people have different opinion is that it hinders communication among friends and family people. I disagree with the statement. I hold this opinion for following reasons.
Firstly, there are many shows on television which are watched by the whole family. Despite of their busy schedules everyone meets on time to watch the program. I remember all my family members gathering by evening to watch a health regarding program telecasted daily, that is the happy time of the day as everyone came to t.v room without fail so that they don’t miss the show.
Secondly, some shows impart great knowledge which can be shared with the friends. This serves as topic of conversation and also improve the general knowledge. I remember my friend who watched the discovery documentary programs and tell about them at school. Later everyone started watching those documentaries and discussed about them and also approach teachers if we needed more information and to understand better.
All in all, viewing television as source for topics, and means for gathering, which actually enhance communication among friends and family. Therefore, I abide to my statement that they don’t destroy the communication between people.
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Sentence: I remember all my family members gathering by evening to watch a health regarding program telecasted daily, that is the happy time of the day as everyone came to t.v room without fail so that they don't miss the show.
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