One of the biggest inventions of the 20th century was certainly television. As time passed, people became more and more dependent on television and wide variety of moview became popular. Nowadays, Television's influence on people's behaviour is undeniable. There are several ways of how TV influences us daily.
First of all, Our mood can be influenced by TV shows and movies that we watch. For example if we wake up and turn on the news and hear that several people died because of a car accident, This certainly will not be a good start of a day for us because for some time we will fill depressed. Same might happen if we watch a movie of tragic genre. On the other hand by watching a comedy movie or a TV cartoon we can boost our mood and morale going into work/school or when we get home arfter a tiring day. These are the prime examples why TV and movies can have powerful effect on us.
Secondly, I believe that a person can increase his general knowledge or knowledge in specific subject by watching TV. For instance I enjoy watching scientific channels since I learn a lot of useful information about our planet. Sometimes getting information this was is better than reading it the book because on TV the informarion is better illustrated. This is the reason some of my friends watch such channels for hours and they really enjoy it. In case of movies there are a lot of educational movies or movies based on scientific evidences which provide us with highly interesting information.Furthermore we can watch movies of detective genre, I admire this type of movies and it is useful because it usually tests my logic.
In conclusion, all the points that i made in the essay lead to the fact that as of today TV and movies have a massive influence on our society and daily lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62068965517 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76767536497 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554858934169 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4742001922 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2666666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155415836733 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597546295135 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537895247076 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100346910679 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393874091219 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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