Invite a friend to join you for your next vacation. Please say
- What are your plans?
- Why do you want to travel with him/her?
- Why do you think he/she will like it?
Dear Anne,
It's been a long time since the last time I heard from you. In the next 5 days there's a holiday and I'm going to go to Kish island, so I thought it would be a good opportunity for us to have a visit. I remember we had a great time together in our last trip to Turkey.
As you mentioned in your last letter, you're so tired and I guess this trip can fresh your soul and mind. Besides, in this season there are many good offers in shopping stores so we can enjoy shopping and the fascinating weather at the same time. The travel agency that I talked to suggest me a 3 star hotel which is...
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