Some people think that only the society should be blamed for any anti-social activities. What are causes for these activities? Who is responsible for them?
The anti-social activities are those activities which are opposite of the society. As well ass they are not in favour for the welfare of society. For instance, the topic asserts that should people blammed the society for anti-social activities so what are the causes and who is responsible for all? I shall examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some proactive measures that authorities and individual could implement to reduce these anti-social activities.
The first step is to understand why is the happening? Broadly speaking, there are two main reasons for this. The first and foremost reason that is awareness. Therefore the people are not aware regarding the anti-social activities. As well as the people are not educated proper about these activities. Moving forward, these activities are very harmful for the people and they not feel secure in the society. They do not know how to handle this type of activities. The some people are choosing the bad company which greatly effect the people and bad company also push to people in anti-social activities.
After that there are some more causes for this anti-social activities. For instance, the unemployment is very biggest cause of this because people have no work for earnings money so as a result they help to earn money from the crime and robbery. Apart from this, the some anti-social activities are arise from the religious because related to the religious the people create bad noise which are harmful for the people.
In conclusion there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worse. While it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this, this could probably solved by government. Because these are all possible with the help of both individual and government. On the other hand the government provide the employment and also conduct the seminar regarding awareness of the anti-social activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, broadly speaking, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12063492063 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69382242627 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469841269841 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4691599532 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8947368421 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5789473684 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461462324335 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143369007725 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133688702943 0.0667982634062 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294646219217 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160543729691 0.056905535591 282% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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