Nowadays most parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. what are the reasons for parents to do this? does it have a positive or negative effect on children in general?

With the Development Of world, There is no doubt that Our way of living Has completely changed. However, This change is now Receiving drawback From more and more people, especially from Children. They are pushed in Hardly to Fulfill Their parents Expectations. This essay will discuss Some reason why Parents Do this As well as It’s negative effects.

On the one hand, There are numerous causes due to which parents Pressurize their children. Firstly, Parents appose a lot of expectations From their children which result As a burden For them. These days, Achieving success Is a competition In itself. The life Without success Is considered to be a ship without a sailor. Also, Apart from parental pressure there is also peer pressures. Take Vietnam As an example, where students Have to take Extra classes To meet the Competition. This can be Really exhausted For them To take Evening classes After a Tiring day At school.

On the other hand, this trend Puts Many negative Effects. Such as, those students Who do not spend Enough time In extracurricular Activities, Face health issues. Mostly these include: obesity, Diabetes And heart diseases. In addition, They can be physically Weak As compared to their Counterparts. Moreover, The success path Defined by parents Do not always work for children. Alternatively, they can Surely be Successful If they Maximize their Performance In their own talent And interest.

In conclusion, Every parent Want their children To be successful, Therefore, They push them to Work hard Because they have associated Lot of expectation From their them. In result, children Often Could not follow their talent and hence do not Achieve Maximum success. Also, They face Physical weakness And many health problems By not taking part in extracurricular activity. In my opinion, Children should be given free hand to choose their career.

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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21122112211 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76574351865 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607260726073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8662636067 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.1904761905 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7619047619 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332779897629 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950291785652 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081849918764 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209315850097 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131787450683 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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As the world is developing parents want their children to be counted among successful people and thus, end up pressurizing them. However, personally I feel that, this has very ill effect on the children's future.This essay will highlight the reasons for this attitude of parents and the impact of the same on children.

No parent in general would think ill for their child. They always try to give them better but unfortunately, this thought is creating a negative, competitive cold society. Firstly, as the world is advancing and literacy rate is booming being literate is not just enough in the society. One needs to be smarter than others, so as to get absorbed by the renowned organisations. Hence, this is the main reason as to why parents pressurize their child to study hard. Secondly, arts and sports does not hold good recognition in the society unlike science or business. Therefore, studying hard is considered to be the only key to be successful.

However, irrespective of the reason and intention, forcing children to do something against their will is definitely unacceptable. There are various factors that makes it evident that pressure has negative impact on child's future. For example, children those are forced to study when young quit to study further. One reason is, they are too scared of failure and fear of getting pressurized haunts them. Additionally, since no one enjoys being forced children tend to dislike studies and fail to study enthusiastically. Finally, they have a feeling that they have studies enough and didn't enjoy any plays thereof ind studies boring. in contrast to this, students who are taught to balance between studies and other activities like playing become successful at the later stages even if they were not the brightest.

To recapitulate, parents should motivate their child to study and not pressurize. As pressure will only lead to degrading their future and not forming it.