Touristic trips to distaте nations gained popularity and continues to be controversial topic because, even with development of tourism industry, drawbacks occur situateonaly. There are compelling arguments on both sides, which I will consider now.
On the one hand, some people think that tours to exotic countries defile the prestain environment which could be preserved for future use such as crops planting. Furthermore, it might be stated that tourism has adverse effects on local land organisation. This can be in form of reconstructioning residential territory for a straightforward usage by tourists, which has ripple effects on local infrastructure. Lastly, It is well known that tourism results in cutting down trees to make way for hotels and other touristic facilities. Some people believe that these detrimental impacts outweight any other benefits.
On the other hand, greater demand for tourist destination assist local economy by creating job opportunities. Consequently, it would be possible to alleviate unemployment if provided workplaces meet the need of local people. Finally, residents of remote and exotic places might struggle to make a living. As a result, wealth gap is gradually widening, which breaks social cohesion. However, it is often prevented by improvements in economy, which are governed by organised tours.
Overall, negative effect of tourism exist and should not be neglected, especially in the form of environmental problem. However, tourism bring enormous benefits for indigious people by creating opportunities for people to work, and for countrys' economy to gradually grow and flourish.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, well, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70204081633 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16879306352 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3582565902 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7857142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258790406912 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720147512566 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538783477222 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135082245469 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585770261282 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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