The television in today's society has become one of our most basic resources of information. We are informed through the television of the latest news, weather, and information which are important in our daily lives. Through television we can be warned about almost anything from a hurricane approaching to the fact that the stock market is falling. Television is a great way of educating the people throughout society with important issues that affect our daily lives. Be it social, political, economic or medical. There is always something new to be told, and television is the quickest way to be informed. Through various news programs and documentaries, the television keeps us educated.
First, television today has a lot of positive effects and influences on our society and our American culture. Television gives us helpful information, various forms of education, and entertainment which are all a part of these positive effects.
Second, every other day it seems there is another violent act occurring because of the media. Some people say it is all because of television. Others say it is because of the lack of responsibility of other people. More laws are needed restricting violence in the media. Americans have the right to go to any form of school or college and gain knowledge in a nice and safe environment. They should be able to receive medical aid in a public hospital without the worry of being shot while getting medical attention. They should be able to go to work without fear of assault. They should be able to enter government-affiliated places, libraries or shopping malls without fear of verbal or bodily attack.
Third, some of the studies done by the National College of Television reported that children demonstrate higher levels of interpersonal aggression shortly after watching violent, energetic entertainment.
In conclusion, Watching television has many positive and negative effects on the behavior among children. Positive effects include, while negative effects include violence, behave aggressively and their emotional aspects affected. Technology makes our life easy and it becomes a part of our lives everywhere, anywhere.
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- TPO-01 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay inorder to do so. A mandatory policy requiri 70
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- TPO 54 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 575, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to go to work without fear of assault. They should be able to enter government-affi...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...r of verbal or bodily attack. Third, some of the studies done by the National College of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3527696793 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03721810092 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568513119534 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8832826999 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4285714286 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38095238095 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147076724399 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436298444709 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522084310562 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844676993279 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585693899719 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.