The student discusses about the portrait of Jane Austen, but he don’t agree the writing’s opinion.He gives 3 reasons.
First, in the writing, that says Jane’s family recognize this portrait is very similar with Jane. But in the listening, the student says this family not saw the Jane, because that time Jane already dead 70 years, so it’s unbelievable.
And then, because this family is so big, and there are so many teenagers and children, and because the girl in teenage are very resemble, so we don’t according this recognize this portrait is Jane.
Thirdly, the student says just according the painting style contact this portrait to the painter is unbelievable, at that time, Jane was almost 27-year-old, she wasn’t teenager.
So all in all, the student don’t agree the opinion in the writing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...apos;t agree the writing's opinion.He gives 3 reasons. First, in the writi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 30.3222958057 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 1373.03311258 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 134.0 270.72406181 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32089552239 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 4.04702891845 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84101056948 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 145.348785872 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 419.366225166 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6196892265 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.833333333 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207444154769 0.272083759551 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115871613266 0.0996497079465 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524683435156 0.0662205650399 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116261314915 0.162205337803 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508934320825 0.0443174109184 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 63.6247240618 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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