Do you agree or dis agree that children should spend more time in studying or playing rather than spending their time helping their families in day to day house hold chores. support with the reasons.
Children are like clay after giving a shape they form in that shape. So as on the basis, childhood is very important age of the life to make their future. For that most of the people think that studying and playing is important, in contrast other thinks household chores are important. this would be the grate debt. In my point of view i would like to support to give more attention for playing and studying rather than help in house hold chores. My reasons to agree the sentence are as follows.
First of all I would like to say that studying and playing is most important part in the childhood life. These make children career strong. But household work is also important to make them responsible. Children should be more focused on the studying and playing. Because somethings should be happen in certain age. Person can learn household chores in any age, but studying and playing can only be learned in childhood.
Secondly, studying and playing can make children future career. If children spend excessive time in household time they could not give required time for the important things. In my point of view children should do house hold chores in the extra time after completing major work.
In the end, household chores is also important as studying and playing, but with respect to the time, we should know what is necessity to the children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you mean 'happened'?
Suggestion: happened
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Suggestion:
...e time, we should know what is necessity to the children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, in contrast, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 235.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77021276596 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39471275157 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514893617021 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6663685248 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0625 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6875 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285305038729 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862220637842 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727623513337 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177501218878 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664338177706 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 86.8835125448 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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