The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarise the informaiton by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart presents the ranking of 10 nations in the world in terms of electricity generation and usage in 2014. In general, China and United States dominated in both categories.
It is clear to see that United States and China were in the lead with considerable difference. China ranked number one for both the production with 5,396 billion kWh and the consumption with 5,322 billion kWh. These numbers were outstanding as they were moderately higher than that of second place by just over 1000 billion kWh. Nevertheless, United States' figures were also dramatically high with both categories, at around 4000 billion kWh.
On the other hand the remaining countries in the top 10 had much lower level of generation and usage of electricity. To begin with, Russia ranked third with a dramatic difference of 3000 billion kWh in production from the former. Moreover, following up was Japan, then India. Lastly, Korea sat at the bottom of the chart with 485.1 billion kWh for production and 449.5 billion kWh for usage of electricity, which were about 11 times lower than the figures of China.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, then, third, in general, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98360655738 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64300168588 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584699453552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 134.60569779 43.030603864 313% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.285714286 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8571428571 5.23603664747 303% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0833173091868 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039380097492 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408917564313 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671793688115 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254384334131 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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