The table below describes victims by age group and offence category in Venezuela, 1999.
The table illustrates the data on people of five age groups who became victims of various types of crimes in Venezuela in 1999
Overall, robbery had the largest number of victims, while the figure for negligence was lowest. It is apparent that people who are aged 65 and over had the smallest proportion of victims
We can see that robbery predominated among three offence items with 9680 victims, followed by kidnapping and blackmail with 233 and 223 victims respectively. In contrast, the figure of negligence victims was merely 54 cases and accounted for only 4% of the total number of victims
It is noticeable that people who are from 25 to 44 years old did not fall victim to negligence. In addition, people who are aged 15 to 64 accounted for more than 90 % of the proportion of robbery victim. Age group from 25 to 44 had the highest number of victims to be attacked by murder, at 72 cases, and blackmail offenders, at 89 cases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to be attacked by murder, at 72 cases, and blackmail offenders, at 89 cases. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69277108434 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63590066559 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2579406059 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.8 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241513496492 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131011306108 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525347467785 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161067746267 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100109828602 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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