Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The nations defense is a major responsibiity for any government taking due regard of the safety for the citizens, although arts takes the interests of the people to new heights and helps the nation to flourish.
Every country is unique and has a tapestry of cultures and religions. Arts in the form of music, literature, theater etc -play a major role in promoting and preserving this diversity. Take India for instance, there are so many religions and spoken languages in different parts of the country- all these diverse societies need their cutlture and heritage a voice, to resonate througout the coming generations.With promotion to arts people get a chance to portray their ideologies and spread their communal qualities which the world can see or experience by their works.
Not only in preserving the culture, exemplary personalities who have exceptional performance in the field of Arts help their nation to put a mark at a global level. People with talent can no longer be harbingered by their race or religion, their works help themselves and thier countries to shine and get recognition. This promotes the countries economy as well since many foreign countries visualize the ability of the nation as a whole when sich eminent personalities showcase their talents.Take Rabindranath Tagore or Arundhati Roy for example, India has put a mark in literature and people all around the world recognize India's litrary standards all for such talented personalities works.Therefore equal investments towards arts would give impetus to more people showcasing their talents and put their countries name high.
Notwithstanding the the merits of equal investments in Arts, we need to realize the fact that the nations safety is also equally important. Brave men show their gallantry for their nations at the cost of their lives- no money can every commensurate for their contributions towards their mother-land. Martyr's should be given special compensation, especially thir families who have lost their loved one need to be supported financially. Funds need to be allocated for good military equipment as well, a weak country will is always susceptible to foreign hostility. Therefore a large amount of funds should be preserved for military interests.
Governments need to strike the right balance in investing between the two highly useful resources. Although giving impetus to arts seems promising, they should not forget that military is also equally important instrument of the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2107.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34771573604 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9770015668 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571065989848 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.718641563 60.3974514979 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.5 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0964509459063 0.243740707755 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384835385895 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275188591559 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702684161762 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243399745802 0.0667264976115 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.