Environment has seen enormous change since the inception of industrial revolution including rise in earth's temperature, increase in sea level and reduction in polar ice cap. It is questioned that whose responsibility to solve this issue. It is government, private entity or individual to solve this problem. In my opinion, since everyone including government, private bodies and individuals have created environment issues, so its collective responsibility of everyone to solve this menace. This essay will also offer solutions to be taken in order to annihilate this problem and save the pristine ecosystem.
At the outset, due to the urge of development, governments have allowed industries to exploit the natural resources which has caused the many problems like emission of greenhouse gases. The greenhouse gases are the main source of air pollution which has caused the increase in earth's temperature. In other words, Increased temperature has led to change the weather pattern and sea level rise. Nowadays, it is been observed that irregular weather pattern is common across the globe. Industries have never explored the other alternative of fossil fuels , if they would have explored and implemented in their industry practices World would have been a better place to live. Individuals have always preferred their private vehicles or fossil fuel driven automobile and this has made the air pollution worse. So , everyone has created the problem for environment.
There are two solutions which can solve this issue. Firstly, everyone should minimize the usage of fossil fuels which is the source of problem. In the place of fossil fuels, people should use the renewable energy source which is considered as clean energy. Secondly, Government should stop using power plant which are run by coal. Instead of coal, industries and governments should focus towards nuclear energy.
In conclusion, since this problem is created by everyone including authorities, industries and individuals, so everyone has to come forward to solve this problem by minimizing usage of fossil fuels and coal which is the main source of pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1207.87684729 149% => OK
No of words: 332.0 242.827586207 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43373493976 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84501724617 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518072289157 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 379.143842365 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0369101108 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115712656534 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042400581461 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357893292368 0.071462118173 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723480815551 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398063677877 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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