The first car appeared on the British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on the British roads.
Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws should be introduced to control car ownership and use
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Motorised vehicles, namely cars, first appeared on the British roads in the year 1888. Since then there have been estimated over 29 million cars in the year 2000 alone. Owing the problem of excessive cars, people have encouraged different modes of transport and hope to introduce international laws which control car ownership and usage. However, in my opinion, I believe that though cars have made our day to day lives easier, they have had a detrimental effect on the human health and the earths environment.
With regards to the individual, the impact that the invention of cars clearly has its advantages. Firstly, people are are able to travel long distances in a short period of time, without having to physically exert themselves. Secondly, it provides confront and shelter, from snow rain and other climatic conditions, during journeys. Finally, the driver has control over the schedule of the journey as opposed to other models of transport.
On the other hand, the effects that cars have on the individuals health and earths environment can be seen as anything but advantageous. Rather than exercising while commuting by walking or cycling, people choose to drive. Consequently, they exercise less, this could lead in a plethora of health diseases( such as cardiac diseases and obesity). Moreover, cars convert fuel to carbon monoxide, which is a deadly air pollutant that can damage both the human health and the earths atmosphere.
To conclude, although cars have made it easier to commute to work for the average person, they do not provide the daily exercise required by the people. They have had a similar effect in the environment by making it highly polluted. Hence, I believe that other alternatives must be explored and international laws and policies must be adopted for the usage and ownership of the cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: are
...rly has its advantages. Firstly, people are are able to travel long distances in a shor...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ble to travel long distances in a short period of time, without having to physically exert the...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...hand, the effects that cars have on the individuals health and earths environment can be se...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...an damage both the human health and the earths atmosphere. To conclude, although c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70261396101 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9211182779 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242962167618 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741151399985 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792311203881 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131310379489 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813638245655 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.