A marriage is a bond between two human beings. A bond that is destined to last entire lives. It is a pledge to be together in times of joy and grief. Essentially, a marriage is a symbiosis of two human beings that like each other. Personally, I do not think that the person you're marrying should be similar to you. I think it's better to marry someone you like, rather that someone who's just alike.
Firstly, marrying someone similar to you does not make the person naturally compatible with you. For example, say, Mr. X likes to play video games during the weekends and wants Mrs. X to take care of the household chores. But, if Mrs. X is similar to him, she would in turn expect the same from her husband. Such a situation would mean, that no household chores get done and both would disapprove of their significant other's behaviour. This might be a very simplified example, but I hope it explains the point. Similarity doesn't mean compatibility. Ideally, it would be better if Mr and Mrs X, could be understanding of each other and both took turns to finish the work.
Secondly, there is always a chance of a person changing overtime. Marrying a person similar to you will not be beneficial in any way as there is no guarantee, that their behaviour will be similar to yours over the period of time.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solution that if they were to try to solve the problem individually. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- It is better to marry someone who is similar to you, rather than someone who is differnt from you. 60
- Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why? 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 236.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53813559322 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58007009719 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588983050847 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1046153919 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8823529412 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240269033185 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070478842969 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118028412556 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163880041692 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046927419781 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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