Global warming is one of the most troubling matters for people and scientists these days. There is a major well-known cause for this problem and its impacts are really significant. So, it is essential that government and citizens focus on resolving this problem before further damaging circumstances.
The major cause of global warming is the high level of carbon footprints and greenhouse gasses emission into the atmosphere. The sun’s radiation passes through the atmosphere and heats up the Earth. Most of these radiations reflected back but if the layer of the atmosphere thickened these radiations trapped in the Earth and makes it warmer. Carbon dioxide and greenhouse gasses thickened the layer of atmosphere and cause a warmer climate for the worldwide which as a result, people experienced drought or in some cases increase in precipitation in some areas. Actually, global warming relocates the precipitation. For instance, global warming caused further rainfall in Africa desert, otherwise lack of rain in tropical fields.
Moreover, since carbon dioxide and greenhouse gasses caused global warming, reduction in these gasses emission is a possible solution to tackle the problems. The role of government is highly critical in order to impose strict regulations to use renewable resources instead of fossil fuels. Additionally, because trees absorb carbon dioxide rather than release it into the atmosphere, therefore, defining punishment for deforestation can play a vital role in protecting the environment. Individuals also are responsible to protect the environment and reduce their level of carbon footprints by using some efficient approaches such as using public transportation instead of private cars or using efficient electric appliances or high mileage cars. Hence, the consequences of global warming are worldwide and each person is responsible to be conscious of this phenomenon influences.
To conclude, the major cause of global warming is the emission of harmful gasses in the atmosphere and government and individual should be conscious about the outcomes of their devastating activities, which produce gasses and preserve the Earth by reducing them.
- In most of the education systems, students are assessed by written examinations. Do you think it is a good idea or not? Give your reasons. 80
- Some people think that women should be able to do whatever job they are qualified for including police work while others think that is it wrong to allow woman to become police officers What is your opinion 77
- Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping, etc. and whether you support them or not. 85
- In many countries plastic bags are the main source of rubbish causing pollution in oceans and on land; therefore they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 67
- Learning a new language at an early age is helpful for children. Is it more positive for their future aspect or have some adverse effects? Agree or disagree? 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 96, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gasses'' or 'gas's'?
Suggestion: gasses'; gas's
...used global warming, reduction in these gasses emission is a possible solution to tack...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63444108761 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99157733683 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531722054381 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3173892319 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209637555285 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813440202663 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706456192481 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135580112923 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186746743978 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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