Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas.
Why do you thing that is?
What can be done to reduce the crime rate?
The crime commitment in municipals is more that rustic regions. In my point of view, the overpopulation in urban areas and the satisfaction in rural areas cause that. In this essay, we will discuss the reasons and the solution to decrease the crime rate.
In the urban district, the crime rate has a significant growth because of overpopulation. The number of people who live in a city is approximately high and it is tough to control the huge number of people or force them to obey the laws, because, big societies always have difficulties of controlling or preventing the crime commitment. Besides, it would get worst when the rate of rural-urban migration increase dramatically.
On the other hand, we have a nearly low crime rate in rural zones and that is because of satisfaction existence in the life of rural people. The main reason for the crime commitment is enthusiastic of wanting more, such as more money, more calmness, more respects, more strength,…, but people who live in the villages are rightly satisfied and they found no reason to commit a crime. They seem to be peaceful and calm and have whatever they want in their life.
Finally, about the solution to reducing the crime rate, in my view, the government should increase the welfare of the citizen of the rural country in order to decrease the rate of rural-urban migration, so, that leads them to control the urban areas better. Moreover , they have to increase the security of the city by training a mass number of police officers to control the crime commitment in the cities.
In conclusion, in most countries, more crime take place in the urban zone in comparison with the rural zone and in this essay we debate the causes and the solution of reduction of the crime as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257396449704 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.115384615385 0.155533422707 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.094674556213 0.0946595960268 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0355029585799 0.0501214627716 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0414201183432 0.0437548338989 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136094674556 0.122226691241 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0177514792899 0.0403226058552 44% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.75831839061 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0295857988166 0.0326793684256 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.136094674556 0.0861772015684 158% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00887573964497 0.021408717616 41% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0118343195266 0.011925033212 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1764.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 305.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78360655738 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.285245901639 0.374742101984 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219672131148 0.28420135186 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170491803279 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104918032787 0.137316102897 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75831839061 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488524590164 0.56093040696 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.4816798835 60.7387585426 80% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 25.4166666667 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7553263598 49.517814964 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 127.492653851 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 47.3838797814 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 2.13846153846 1.69124875643 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404939210758 0.332605444948 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.160410769578 0.102741220458 156% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0777595238392 0.0668466124924 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.710421467508 0.534860350844 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166911177915 0.148594505496 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230042547673 0.134430193775 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844113495974 0.0742795772207 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.444590561332 0.324371583561 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0383366359467 0.0638462369009 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314072079687 0.228012699653 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704586063274 0.058150111329 121% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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