The reading and the lecture both discuss a painting claimed to be a portrait of Jane Austen the famous English novelist. The author of the reading claims that the though the skillful painting is not titled Jane Austin, some evidences prove that. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the reading. He states that the painting is not a portrait of Jane Austin. Let's take a closer look at both.
To begin with, the author of the reading pushes forth the idea that the Austin's has confirm that the portrait belongs to Jane Austin as they gave the copy right of the picture to be used in her letters. In the lecture the professor has completely different idea on this point made by the author of the reading. He asserts that Austin's family in 1882 about 17 years after the death of Jane Austin they haven't seen her. He raises doubt that they may not remember her accurately.
Furthermore, the reading contends that the depicted face of Jane Austin is entirely similar to the Cassandra's sketch which is known as Jane Austin portrait. On the other hand, the lecturer says that the Jane Austin had lots of family member which may looks like to her. He notes out that the portrait is in complete resemblance to her niece called marry and in this way he rejects the point made by the reading.
Last but not least, the writer of the article states that the proofs link the painting to the famous painter Ozias Humphrey who may have been hired by Austin's family to depict a portray of young Jane. This point is strongly rejected by the professor, he says that a part of painting which is used by the Humphrey in many years later when the Jane Austin novelist were not young at all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the though the'. Did you mean 'though the'?
Suggestion: though the
.... The author of the reading claims that the though the skillful painting is not titled Jane Au...
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Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...Jane Austin, some evidences prove that. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made...
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Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...nting is not a portrait of Jane Austin. Lets take a closer look at both. To begin w...
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Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'confirmed'.
Suggestion: confirmed
...hes forth the idea that the Austins has confirm that the portrait belongs to Jane Austi...
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Line 2, column 401, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ars after the death of Jane Austin they havent seen her. He raises doubt that they may...
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Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... been hired by Austins family to depict a portray of young Jane. This point is strongly r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50326797386 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17557735503 2.5805825403 84% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467320261438 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2144322843 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06452816374 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226250038018 0.272083759551 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873451661585 0.0996497079465 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635985005109 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148772637415 0.162205337803 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421527699834 0.0443174109184 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.3589403974 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.8541721854 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.2367328918 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.