Dear Weber,
Hope this letter finds you in good spirit and health. Having the knowledge about your change of the job, I have enquired in our company about the openings and I have good news for you. I am writing this letter to let you the opportunities our company has.
Our firm has a couple of jobs for Web designer and Web Programmer. I know how good you are at the designing part. Your skills of logo design, photo edits, photoshopping will sure be a greater asset to the company. This job also posses a large scale of pay which might make you more interested in joining and pay off your bank debts at the earliest possible. I wonder if you could take a look at the careers page of our firm's website and apply for the job numbered JWD-0234. Do not forget to mention my name in the subject line for a token of referrals program.
I can't wait to welcome you as a colleague and make greater applications together and develop strong skills.
Regards,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...for a token of referrals program. I cant wait to welcome you as a colleague and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49717514124 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40689901829 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638418079096 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1809045111 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263496716113 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825829068901 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704938976821 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142363146874 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100730934347 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.