Some people like to buy books to read, others like to borrow books from libraries or from other people. Compare the advantages of these two ways of reading. Which do you prefer? Why?
Reading is an essential need for majority of people. Nowadays it is not difficult to find books: one can purchase them from stores, other can take them from a library. Both ways have advantages and it is apt for people to decide which way is more convenient for them.
On one side, new books are more alluring; they have smell of the printer and no one has owned them before. There are special editions, especially if it is the first one, of books which people want to have at home and reread them. A good illustration is my friend’s collection of special editions of Harry Potter. She was passionate to buy all parts, because they were selling one after another, not all at once, so she was going back to the store as often as she could. As a result she now has the complete special edition Harry Potter collection. Moreover, she has a special shelf for these books. As you can see, purchasing new books worth it if you want to have the first edition collection at home.
On the other hand, borrowing books from libraries or from friends can help save space in a house. In my parent’s time it was a trend to keep huge library at home, there were a plethora of shelves with variety of books alongside walls. Nowadays we do not follow this tradition, furthermore, open space is more valuable in apartments. For example, if I want to read I simply go to the library and borrow books. Usually, my family read more than 20 books a month. Accordingly, we would be out of space at home if we bought each book. Consequently, it is more reasonable to save place by borrowing books from libraries instead of purchasing them.
As for me, I prefer to borrow books from library, inasmuch as I read a lot and study with a myriad of tutorials. There is no extra space in my home to keep all this literature. Thus it is wise for me just take and return books to the library.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...in my home to keep all this literature. Thus it is wise for me just take and return ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, as for, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44637681159 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54213970311 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510144927536 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9296992725 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.7 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269075418189 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831549817793 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721171473068 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163801542425 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596201316968 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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