Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.
Over the past decades, the possession of car has translated into a pivotal component of an average household. Alongside the changing need in the society, the latest sociological discoveries has casted light on the benefits and drawbacks of investing a car. This essay will use the examples from these academic work to assert that the advantages of owning a car outweigh its disadvantages.
To begin with, the ensuing convenience is intuitively perceived as the desired outcome of having a car. What this means is the stations or stops of public transportation could be far away from our destination. Even if some car parks might not be in close proximity to our locations, the walking distance required are still shorter at large. For instance, recent empirical research from the Road Department established that the average walking distance from a private car park to a major shopping mall is significantly shorter than those measured from metro stations. Seen in this light, it is undeniable that the convenience of driving could save us plenty of time.
Although the positive consequences are remarkable, the beneficial implications should not be overstated, in particular the financial cost induced in operation of a car. This is because the price of fossil fuel utilised by a car is deemed exorbitant. In fact, having conducted an extensive study, the World Commodity Group ascertained that the fuel cost has doubled over the last decade and is anticipate to keep growing in the subsequent years. Consistent with this line of thinking, it is broadly believed that the electric vehicles would have dominated the market if they had been invented in much earlier time. Consequently, the majority of car owners are now considering to replace their petrol-powered one.
In conclusion, there is ample evidence suggesting that both positive and negative impacts exist on owning a car, yet, given the advent of environmental-friendly vehicles, the upsides outnumber the downsides. It is predicted that the government will enact any measures to foster the replacement of existing model in the foreseeable future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
... Even if some car parks might not be in close proximity to our locations, the walking distance ...
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Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'anticipated'.
Suggestion: anticipated
...has doubled over the last decade and is anticipate to keep growing in the subsequent years...
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Line 5, column 664, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considering replacing'.
Suggestion: considering replacing
...tly, the majority of car owners are now considering to replace their petrol-powered one. In conclus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29080118694 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12312249334 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626112759644 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6439522871 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.866666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172362289382 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546938973579 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373369586384 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961499216627 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373692607003 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.