Bar char is statistical representation of variations in proportion of both the gender work in six types of different education in the Uk in 2000.
At a glance it is observed that striking factor being the contrasting trend in six different types of educational jobs in the Uk in 2000.
On statically anlyasis, More than 95% of females teacher teached Nursary school.moreover, negible 5% male teacher teached pre school. Which was 95% less than female teachers. In secondary school both the male and female teacher had marginal difference if less than 5%.Apart from that , In college 50% both the genders were teacher .shockingly, private educatons and university overall dominance of males . In private education more than 55% of male teachers and 41% of female teachers. In university 30% more than male teachers worked .70% of male work in university and bleak 30% of female teacher worked in UK.
In the nutsell, overall least women teach in higher schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ble 5% male teacher teached pre school. Which was 95% less than female teachers. In s...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Apart
...had marginal difference if less than 5%.Apart from that , In college 50% both the gen...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...fference if less than 5%.Apart from that , In college 50% both the genders were te...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ollege 50% both the genders were teacher .shockingly, private educatons and unive...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th the genders were teacher .shockingly, private educatons and university overall...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd university overall dominance of males . In private education more than 55% of m...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ak 30% of female teacher worked in UK. In the nutsell, overall least women teach ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08860759494 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87877469594 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.025524317 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228918613859 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105996169085 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537657087354 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121335034218 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706816968127 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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