The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts show changes in the distribution of population in different region of the world in 1900 and 2000. Overall,the total number of population increased to a large extent in only one century and most this growth occurred in the developing countries.
It is clearly seen from the chart that both Europe and Asia showed a decrease in the number of population. Population declined by a significant number in Europe from 25% to 14%, followed by Asia which experienced a 6% reduction in it's population size. On the other hand, Latin America's population tripled approximately from 3% to 8% an...
- The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 76
- Many of the elderly need care and support from the family. To live in a care home is a best option. Do you agree or disagree? Provide your opinion. 75
- There are many things that motivate a person to work but money is the most compelling In your opinion how influential is the power of money 76
- As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes Why does this happen How does this affect society 90
- Some people think that government should provide library in every town. With the increase in internet, some people think that new libraries could be a waste of money. Discuss your opinion. 90
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