The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts show changes in the distribution of population in different region of the world in 1900 and 2000. Overall,the total number of population increased to a large extent in only one century and most this growth occurred in the developing countries.
It is clearly seen from the chart that both Europe and Asia showed a decrease in the number of population. Population declined by a significant number in Europe from 25% to 14%, followed by Asia which experienced a 6% reduction in it's population size. On the other hand, Latin America's population tripled approximately from 3% to 8% an...
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