Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discussion both and give your opinion.
Nowadays, in the busy world, more individulas have no enough time to cure their health and there are many reasons which affects on human’s body such as day by day in the world increaing pollution in the environment, unneccessary taking foods, and other factors. Many people believe that the exercise is a best way for good health but other individuals think that perfect balance charts of dieting. My opinion, both factors are most importance for better health so I will discuss both statements in further paragraphs.
First of all, people use different ways for keeping good health but the exercise is vital part of human life. All body parts need movement everytime ans so that people should do exercise daily. The exercise can help to control on our body’s parameters such as blood pressure controlling, diabetes controlling and other required things. In the exercise, there are several types which are used according to age wise. For example, walking exercise is common for all ages but others exercises like cycling, running, jumping and many more which are helpful for kids as well as youngers.
On the flip side, although exercise is very necessary for health but body requires first foods so they can work and do exercise. But, firstly, people have dieting system should be perfect and should have only such foods which are very useful for better health. In fact, there are different kinds of food are available in the market which are harmful for health such as fast food, fried food and other over spices foods. Actually, for better health, individuals should have more and more vegetables and fruits which fulfil necessarily things like Vitamins, Minerals, Carbohydrate and more others.
To conclude, in spite of people have different views for health but my opinion is that both factors are actually necessarily for healthier life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, for example, in fact, such as, as well as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 305.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11475409836 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50870883018 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4660286732 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254038916111 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998690311965 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543241368848 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171521897668 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458680037333 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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