Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
In this present time, many people hold the view that the best way to success in the occupation is to study at university or college. In contrast, some people support the opinion that finds a job after school is more beneficial.
On the one hand, today the education in university and college are really developed, which help students in learning and choose a right career in the future as well, and I agree. At university or college where students can learn basic knowledge from experts as well as professors who had huge experiences from work and researches. As a result, they will give a plenty of valuable advice which greatly assists students to select a suitable career. Furthermore, an environment in university or college with has a variety of modern facilities which help students update new technologies, concepts, theories and encounter to solve real situations at work. Consequently, they will have more confidence when finding a job and highly success at workplace. For instance, my old friend used to study at a well-known university, in the last year of study he had found a good job before he graduated.
On the other hand, many people think that students ought to get an employment since they would work in a professional and practical environment where they can meet a lot of seniors people who have huge experience. Therefore, students can gain full knowledge from them. Additionally, earning money when young, which help students save money and in the future they can run their own business.
In conclusion, get a job or study at university or college have many advantages. Nevertheless, from my point of view, students should study at university or college to have a better preparation for a successful career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89916958876 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541379310345 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9349299431 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279345952623 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108934462228 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818145197587 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201709321788 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102900013854 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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